offlineLogo Design Contest

Number #75 is something we are really liking. I'd like to see it developed a little more.

Perhaps make the palm trees a little more realistic looking / colors.

#81 is really neat.... what about making the blue more turquoise

Make offline all one color, turquoise? The hammock and word should be different color. - try black?

The bottom, maybe a sand color?

#83 is realllly neat, however, I think it's hard to read the name itself... specifically the N and the E

#84 is nice, however, we liked the palm tree design and hammock size in #81 better.

We would really love to see #83, but different placement for the hammock. We love the idea of it being in the lettering, but the position it is in makes the wording hard to read.

ebonk, we really like the new logo #103 - we will be reranking

We are still waiting to see #81, but using a more turquoise color for the word offline. The hammock and word should be different color. - try black? We like the design of the palm tree and hammock in #81 better than the #84

The bottom, maybe a sand color?

In addition to the above, we would like to see #103 with the following changes: the blue - make it a little more turquoise versus the blue it is now. Change the palm tree to the style and color in #81. The sand should be a tan/sand color. Please change the orange "line" to a charcoal grey color.

#107 is getting VERY close to becoming our favorite. You missed a few of our requested alterations.

Please change #107 to have the letters 'ine' to a charcoal gray color. This would also change the hammock to that color as well. The birds can be black. Make the line on the bottom of the palm tree a sandy color.

We really like #112 but the colors still do not look correct. My wife is at work today, and we will have some suggestions later in the day. If all we want to do is change colors, that should be very easy, right?

Also, can you please put #112 on the image of the boat we uploaded. You will see a few designers did that - it will help us be able to get an idea of what it will look like on the boat.

sure, colors we can adjust colors at anytime
thanks

If you look at our first ranked right now, those are closer to the blue and green we are after. And I'd be curious to see what the hammock looks like in the same charcoal gray as the lettering.

What is the difference between #122, #123 and #124?

oops sorry, it just double post

We moved #124 to the first place design so you are able to submit a revision.

We want to see #124 - but with these changes:
* We want the blue like the blue color that is in our number two ranked logo
* Make the letters line black instead of the gray
* Make the birds black
* We like the green like the green color that is in our number two ranked logo
* Make a little sand mound (light brown) and water under it ... in the same blue

#127 - we are almost there! Would still like to see the following changes...

Working off of #127 -
* Change the palm tree to the palm tree design you used in #112
* On the lines below the tree, please make the top line a little shorter and make it brown/tan/sand color. The bottom line should be the same blue as the color of the off

Sorry for all the changes... we really like where this is going - and think this will be our winner.

#128 - excellent!!

If the height of the palm tree and lines is 13 inches tall, how wide will the overall graphic be?

Also - can you show this logo on the back of the boat?

If the height of the palm tree is 13 the width is 30.8 "

One comment someone had that we had looking at these... that the 'o' may be hard to read. Can you think of a way to make the 'o' clearer.

Maybe make the center of the 'o' extend under the hammock and person head? I am not sure how that will look.

Thank you for #132, I think in that design with the extra white in the 'o' that it makes it look odd, and that the head of the person doesn't look right.

Thank you for making that quickly to show us..

I think we are ready to choose #128 as the winner.

A few questions:
1) when we take your file to the print shop, if they have issues with anything, are you able to assist to alter the design (minor changes, like color, or if a line needs to be moved)
2) When you provide the files, do you size them to the size we need?
3) are you done designing? I know you said you had a few more ideas that you were thinking of.

Thank you

1)no problem
2)of course, the eps file can adjust in any size, I can assist for minor changes
3)#134 is the O more readable?

^ I think it can be very readable because the "off" does not stand alone, there is a "line" as the next word

yes, #134 is better. we will move that to number one.

sorry I mean this #135 same line at the bottom of tree in #128

#134 and #135 look the same to me. what are the differences

the shape brown in #135 more thinner than #134

Ah, yes. I like the thinner.

We are selecting #135 as the winner. It is getting late here in the United States. If you can please upload the files - that would be great. I will work with the printer tomorrow and see how they think it will print.

Can you please size the logo (to start) as the palm tree and lines at bottom to be 14" tall. I think that will work in the area we need it to fit. If something changes, I will let you know.

Thank you and have a great day.