Of One HeartLogo Design Contest

what do I need to revise again? i will do it right now

what do I need to revise again? i will do it right now

This one is great too - like a middle version between skinny and bold. Love it! Great colors too!

YES! a bit more substantial. This is awesome! Thank you so much.

how about this?

how about this?

I Like this one a lot! Anyway we could thicken the lines on everything a bit, to make it a bit more substantial? That would print better on t-shirts, etc. Thx!

How about this?
please give me feedback again.

Sorry for my delay in responding to your feedback.

Still love this one. Would you mind trying it in just blue and orange? I really like the blue you picked. Please delete the slogan again. Thanks!

thanks, what should I revise again? I'm ready to do it

thanks, what should I revise again? I'm ready to do it

Bolded font of this is better and prefer this color combo for this design. Thanks

prefer #74 with bolded font better.

Definitely prefer the thicker lines, makes it a bit more hearty. Thx. However, I think the original color combo you did was better. Again, great concept! Simple and meaningful and clever all in one.

how about this?
please give me feedback again
thanks :)

how about this?
please give me feedback again
thanks :)

Thanks!

Or maybe if not try the writing in green, maybe thicken the lines a tad? Please delete slogan.

Good bones on this. Like the use of color in the heart. Would you please delete the slogan and thicken the lines on the heart and text, to make it all a bit heavier, more meaty? Thanks.

A top contender!

Clear and simple and impactful. Can you take out the slogan please? Maybe another version of this - play with it a bit. Two colors is simple, but it seems to be missing some of the warmth. Maybe try the writing in green?