Nice! We like the new idea, the new feel you are giving it. It's exactly what we need in this contest.
Here are a few points which we would love to see on your design(s):
1. We need something more refined, more professional-cutting edge feeling. (reflective text looks great, gradient glow effects, mirror effects, glass-like text etc) 2. We need a gradient effect on the company name (dark gray to light gray, and royal blue to light blue) because it will be mostly used for our website, and we'll need a larger color palette.
Once again, great new touch, We eagerly await new designs from you!
Your recent logo is great #122, you deifnitly got the reflective look right, but here are a few changes that would make your logo rank #1.
1. The color palette and gradient effect used by design #120 is exactly what we are looking for, if you go for the same thing it would be perfect. 2. Your text "mirroring" (the reflection of the company name) we would like that to be applied to your logo and to the slogan text aswell. 3. We would like the words "Web" and "IT" in the slogan to stand out a bit, but not too much. Maybe use a font change, bold face or a gradient or gradient-glow effect. 4. The font-family used for the Company name isn't exactly the "feel" we're looking for, look at the other top logos, they have the right feel we need. #102 #52 #120 have the right font.
Once again, you design is great, it feels unique and simple enough. With these few tweaks you would definitly be competing for 1st place.
thanks again, and we eagerly await your new designs
One change to be done, the slogan is: "Bringing the Web and IT to small businesses"
you wrote "business" instead of "businesses"
thank you
EDIT.
Also, the text on the slogan (#125) is too blurry, it needs to be sharper, like on your design #97 We also noticed that what makes the slogan text soo blurry is that the "reflection" of the company name stretches out too far. Look at how logo ranked 1st did it, it's great that way since it doesn,t cut or blur out the text.
Sorry I need to withdraw my entry, someone claiming that my entry is too closed to his winning design. Hope you understand..I have another proposal same approach to my previous entry hope you like this too.
We understand... But we,re wondering if it was someone within our own contest, or from another contest. because your design was unique within our contest.
Your new design is very good, ranked 1st for now, feedback will follow.
We need a minor tweak to your current top logo #152
The reflection of "Nexwave" stretches out too far, it's blending in the background of the slogan. Could you make it fadeout and end just before the slogan, to give it a cleaner look?
We would like to see the same design, but with a small bevel effect on the squares. (First variation)
We would also like to see a variation (same design) but with a small white glowing dot in the middle of each square, with a fine light-blue elliptic line "connecting" each adjacent square... (Second Variation)
And a third variation combining both of the above.
We've been getting feedback that the design feels a bit too much like "Windows" so we would like to see these small variations as a personal touch, to further differentiate the logo.
The connecting lines and dots: The middle glow needs to be larger, more apparent. and the connecting lines need to "hop" from one square to another. right now they are straight lines, we really need it to look like a jump from one to another.