Next Door Pizza and PubLogo Design Contest

Great illustration. I would prefer a more angular font -something that pops more. I'm also interested in seeing it in b&w and/or grayscale! Thanks

i' ve made some modifications. is this better?

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and this one

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i' ve made some modifications. is this better?

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and this one

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and this

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tell me what you like and don't like to change it

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i used gradient red with grey