The idea for the mark is cool, especially on #37, well balanced on sporty and elegant and could stand alone without the text. I'd try to make the text more seductive, with a pinch of color...
It's coming out well. Could you please try a version with the mark as in #37 and text like #112 or #106 ?
About text please make fonts simpler, like for instance closing the "r" in #112 (looks "tech") or simplifying the #106 "r" and "e". Ok for the two colors, though we can't have shades.
Thanks for the comments... It helps... #37 with text like #112 = #190 with "R" closed #37 with text like #106 = #191 with "E" and "R" simplified. And I replaced the shading with two solid colors.
good idea, the #203 encircled logo looks very good and would perfectly stand alone. As far as the text is concerned could you please try to swap it with #190 ?
thanks for your proposals. #241 is running as best candidate so far.
Could you please make a try with the mark on the left, if that makes sense to you. We think about optimizing the space when used in shirts label or a web page, to give a balanced visibility both to the mark and text.
Also we would like to see a try with slimmer text.
Hello, thanks for the variation, yes maybe the red circle balances better, we're unsure about which one is best.
Could you please try a variation with a #316 inspired font ? While we believe that the current font matches well with the mark, we would love to see a try with that one which looks very "fashionish".
Hi, thanks for the comments... I hope these are more "fashionish" variations: #337, #338, #339, #340. These were manually modified text. Here is the original font of #299 with the corners on "N" more angular, #333.
Text can be adjusted to any form, please feel comfortable to ask if there are more variations you'd like to see.
Here is a slightly different take on the symbol: #330. Thank you