Hi - thanks for your entries. We like your #29 - it's simple and the club motif is nice. A few thoughts that we think would definite make this look great:
In terms of color: the lime green doesn't really work for us. Can we make it a richer green? Also, can we see a variation for a different color for the clubs? Right now they look a bit like a plant.
In terms of font: We really like the weight of your font, but the font itself isn't as exciting for us. Our favorite font we've seen so far is #25, and we like the upper-lower case of
#24 - though we actually think your upper/lower case works as well. Can we try a different font or two that moves it in that direction?
Thanks much for your efforts! -Jack