Hi, thanks for your feedback, this is logo #1 with blue color. in my previous design (#1) i used green to incorporate the color of money/profit. in this submission, i add adjustment with "my" but with darker color to balance with the "PrivateArmy" with light color. also i add the "ground" to defined space of a group. looking forward for your feedback. Warm regards, kodoqijo
Thanks for the heads up on where to leave feedback...
So on #4, I don't totally dislike the blue, but I feel that this lighter/brighter shade of blue is a bit too feminine for our target demographic. I think I do still like the contrast of "My" with the rest, but I would rather not diminish its size and importance. The reason I liked the contrast to begin with was because I feel it's important for a small manufacturer to think "Wow, I can put my products on this site and amass MY VERY OWN private army of salespeople."
I do like your intention with the green signifying money or profit. Maybe there's a way to work that in more precisely on the money angle without the whole logo being "military green" ???
I wonder if "Private Army" should be in light green (like #1) for #43.
On #44, I don't really like the red - it seems too strong, but the contrast with the figures and font is somewhat interesting. Same with #40 - it makes it seem like the guy in front could be the customer, with people backing him up maybe.
In general, I am a little worried that the figures you have drawn make for too generic a logo. While the designs are clean and well executed, I want to make sure that the graphical elements in my logo are unique.
#38 - cool graphic. This shade of green is workable. There's something about the font that doesn't totally convince me, but I can't put my finger on it.
#37 - I think graphic is too large in relation to the text. I wonder if the color should be either more orange or a lighter, purer yellow...? And then I wonder if any of these colors would combine well with another color instead of black for the text and/or the black parts of the graphic.
Hi, Thanks a lot for your concern to my design. This is revision #38, response to your previous feedback maybe because it all in caps or thinner font, so i make the revision by using the same font in #1.
The black ties and black outline didn't really work for me. What if the font and figures were not outlined in bold black, but the ties were black??? This might be good.
On #1, which I moved back into first place, is still not a sure thing to win. I like the idea, but maybe it's the color scheme that isn't selling me. I realize that I said "no orange" in the contest brief, but I almost feel like it could work in this case. It would have to be kind of subtle, maybe like the color of the buttons used on these LogoTournament pages.
Hopefully you have the time to work with us over the next 20 hours to get this right. You are a very strong contender in this contest.
Also, I like the idea of having a different color for the figure in the front. That being said, dark red and light green are too stark a contrast. I think that there are probably some combinations out there that might be slightly more subtle and would work great. I would love to see some other versions of #1 and #40 that do this.
Hi, again this time i combine the color of the button and the board in "Hide contest brief" button's color in the main contest page. also with no black tie as in the #1.
#95 - same as #96. Not sure if I love the black ties, but maybe keep it up with both white and black in case we change our mind on that.
Can we try something slightly more orange (not too loud/bold, though)?? Since the contest is running out, feel free to try out a bunch of colors, please.
We like your work so far. Thanks for being so responsive!
Can you do #146 without the reflection? I like it, but I'm not sure yet if I would use the reflection or not. Having the option on these things to do so or not would be great.