Hi jagg3rnaut.
Thank you for your designs.
You are one of the few that caught on with the concept of having the word "My" less pronounced.
I did not know how to comment on your first designs
#19 and
#20 were rather loud. Your second offering was much better.
The thing that strikes me first and foremost with the later designs is the font coupled with the ink drop.
If you look at them you will see a middle eastern or Islamic feel to them. This feel shows in
#83 #81 #82.
The overall designs would not fit our needs But I would like to encourage you.
I would like to place one of your designs with a high ranking if possible.
Have a look around at the type of fonts used by others that have been ranked highly and see if you can come up with a new thought.
I would feel that the wording should not be broken up with graphics unless there is a good reason to do that.
And in any case you need to be in no doubt as to the meaning of the word ie. not have to look at it twice before grasping the meaning.
You have stayed away from fonts that are too bold and that is good.
I encourage you to have another go if you have time
Thanks for your efforts
Regards
Graham