Thank you for your submissions! Here are a few comments.
#8 can you lose the cooking utensils inside the circle? and place the fork knife more like a place setting? We like the type face in #6 Can we see other type faces for Mess Hall in #8 & #9?
I think that the white type inside the box is hard to read. It might be easier to read reversed. If you can make it easier to read the way that you designed it, you can do that too. I just want it to be clearer. Let me know if that makes sense or if you need more direction. Laurie