Merrill Smiles DentalLogo Design Contest

Thanks for the updates!

Our ownership team likes this design but aren't sold on the shape/font of the "S" in Smiles. Can we see any variations on that or on any other part of this design?

Thankyou

Thank you for your work in this logo tournament. If you're receiving this message, you are a finalist in our estimation. This is probably not the way most clients run their logo tournaments, but the nature of our business doesn't allow for ample or regular communication among stakeholders. For that reason, please consider yourself still in the running for the prize. As marketing director of our company, I still need to share most of these concepts with our key stakeholders, get their input, and then run that information past the owner of the company (who will make the final determination after discussing with me). Please also understand that the Christmas/holiday season makes it all the more difficult to get feedback promptly, so we will likely take this tournament right up until the final day...or hours. We appreciate your patience and understanding as we might be temporarily moving you for some final tweaks. All of your work has been appreciated!

Many thanks for Your kindness.

Please advise..
Many thanks.

How about this one?
Please let me know.
Many thanks

Hello,
Many thanks for feedback.
Ok no problem. I'll revise ASAP.
Once again, many thanks for Your kindness.

Harsa

I know the communication has been limited, but I appreciate your design work and hope you'll take time to submit some more variations and ideas for designs. To reiterate some important points about our owner's taste: blues and greys for color, smile images but no teeth, and possibly incorporation of bluejay imagery are appreciated. He very much likes logo images (smile/bird) incorporated into the name as much as possible. Thank you again!

Hi,
many thanks for feedback, it's really helped me.
How about this one?
Feel free if You have any suggestions, revisions or anything, Please let me know. It will be my pleasure to work it.
Once again, many thanks for Your kindness.

Thanks for your designs! I have some feedback to provide before the end of the blind phase. I've just spoken with the company owner about the designs that have come in so far. Some of you will be moving position as a result. But I want to implore you to please keep your designs in the contest, as I'll be getting more feedback over the next couple days. A few things the owner is commenting on that I'd like to emphasize before blind phase ends: (1) He is very much set on a blue and grey color scheme. He's not interested in greens anymore. (2) He is not interested in plant images, so no more logos with stems, shoots, trees, or fields, etc. (3) He does like the idea of trying to incorporate a bluejay (city mascot) into the design, though he's not demanding it and likes many designs without them. (4) He has said he does not want a logo with a cursive or handwritten-looking font. (5) He does not want a design with abbreviations or initials of the name. I hope this is helpful to you, and again, I appreciate your design work!

Like the use of the "S" for the smile. Maybe develop a couple variations with a single smile line and no sparkle?