Merrill Smiles DentalLogo Design Contest

Thank you for your work in this logo tournament. If you're receiving this message, you are a finalist in our estimation. This is probably not the way most clients run their logo tournaments, but the nature of our business doesn't allow for ample or regular communication among stakeholders. For that reason, please consider yourself still in the running for the prize. As marketing director of our company, I still need to share most of these concepts with our key stakeholders, get their input, and then run that information past the owner of the company (who will make the final determination after discussing with me). Please also understand that the Christmas/holiday season makes it all the more difficult to get feedback promptly, so we will likely take this tournament right up until the final day...or hours. We appreciate your patience and understanding as we might be temporarily moving you for some final tweaks. All of your work has been appreciated!

thanks

Looks great!

thank you for the rating you have given , if you need any changes please do not hesitate to let me know .
I am always ready to work with you.

Thank you for these updates!

please check

how about this ?
any suggestion ?

thank you very much , i will send my new design soon .

You are now. We'd definitely be interested in any new variations/designs if you have them. Thank you!

Sorry , it turns out that I am no longer a finalist in your contest and I can not submit my latest design .

ok , please wait .
i will try

I know you're outside the top 5 right now, but I plan to move you back up shortly. The one comment the owner gave about your design is that the bluejay looks a little too much like a dove. Perhaps that design can be tweaked.

I know the communication has been limited, but I appreciate your design work and hope you'll take time to submit some more variations and ideas for designs. To reiterate some important points about our owner's taste: blues and greys for color, smile images but no teeth, and possibly incorporation of bluejay imagery are appreciated. He very much likes logo images (smile/bird) incorporated into the name as much as possible. Thank you again!

Thanks for your designs! I have some feedback to provide before the end of the blind phase. I've just spoken with the company owner about the designs that have come in so far. Some of you will be moving position as a result. But I want to implore you to please keep your designs in the contest, as I'll be getting more feedback over the next couple days. A few things the owner is commenting on that I'd like to emphasize before blind phase ends: (1) He is very much set on a blue and grey color scheme. He's not interested in greens anymore. (2) He is not interested in plant images, so no more logos with stems, shoots, trees, or fields, etc. (3) He does like the idea of trying to incorporate a bluejay (city mascot) into the design, though he's not demanding it and likes many designs without them. (4) He has said he does not want a logo with a cursive or handwritten-looking font. (5) He does not want a design with abbreviations or initials of the name. I hope this is helpful to you, and again, I appreciate your design work!

I wanted to pass along right now in the blind phase that -- regardless of where your designs currently stand in the ranking -- you are not out of consideration for our top design. I run this tournament on behalf of our owner who only has the chance to give feedback periodically. So until I hear from him and other stakeholders, your ranking means very little. All this to say, please do not withdraw any designs (unless I've pointed out a glaring problem), and please do not assume you're out of (or in) the running based on your current position. Thanks for all your work, and I'll try to provide as much helpful feedback as I can going forward.

I wanted to pass along right now in the blind phase that -- regardless of where your designs currently stand in the ranking -- you are not out of consideration for our top design. I run this tournament on behalf of our owner who only has the chance to give feedback periodically. So until I hear from him and other stakeholders, your ranking means very little. All this to say, please do not withdraw any designs (unless I've pointed out a glaring problem), and please do not assume you're out of (or in) the running based on your current position. Thanks for all your work, and I'll try to provide as much helpful feedback as I can going forward.

Like the color scheme here. Not as sure about the font choice, but it's solid.

I think this is getting much closer.

like this ?

This works much better. I think you could actually make the bird and smile a little larger in relation to the rest of the name.

how about this

See my previous comment.

ok , i will try

I like the idea of using a bluejay image. I don't know if it's working particularly well next to the smile, but it'd be nice to see some variations on this. Maybe have the bluejay between the words "Merrill" and "Smiles"

We can't use any logo with the outline of a tooth in it. Just smile shapes.

how about this , any suggestion ?