I really like your abstract designs. This design #54 is very interesting. I do not like the fact that there are 3 eyes-- that's not natural-- but I like the fact that when you look closely at the logo, it has the shape of persons that make up the logo. Please submit more designs that build on this theme. Don't try to incorporate too much of the medical theme-- focus on abstract concepts that show caring, persons, and eyes. Thanks!
For submissions 106 and 107, I think you might have hit on something here. Now try making it only ONE "eye-person" and this may be very interesting. It will look like an eye, but also a person....nice ideas!
Hi there, thanks for the feedback. My idea is to humanize the brand and make it different than the others on the market. With that the brand can have a greater personalizade and stay in the memories of customers.
#114 is a nice step forward. Let's try two things: (a) remove the bubble around the logo, and remove the upper arc of the "eye." and (b) keep the bubble around the logo, and remove the upper arc of the "eye."
When we have the upper arc, it makes it look like an eye with a tail. We don't want that. I really like the sense of a person that can also be seen as an eye, but try to avoid anything that creates a look like an eye with a tail, as in #115.
Let's also try to use lighting and shadowing to create depth. Thanks!
#119 is good, but we're not quite where we need to be. In deleting the arc, now it doesn't look an eye anymore. Somehow we need to revise the design to restore the "eye feeling" but not make it look like an eye with a tail. I am hoping you can create a logo that preserves both the eye feeling and the sense of a person....
Hi there, thanks for the opportunity. Just for your information im a owner of an design agency, so if you need a website or the stationary i can send to you my portifolio and the budget for it.