- Try the text with different colors, maybe some blues - Move the tagline further down, and just below the foam add a layer of beer. Just below that layer, add the tagline. - I don't think the tagline with alternating colors looks good, please keep the tag line one consistent color.
Cool stuff! My thoughts now that I've seen both... here's what I would want you to use in a single design:
- Use the "lotsofhead.com" font color from #18. - Use the beer foam from #18 - maybe you can add a few bits of foam to the tops of some of the characters like it's dripping off. - Use the tagline from #23 - Use the beer from #23 - Use a white background
- the beer head looks more like frosting on top of a cake rather than beer foam, please find a way to draw it more like foam which has a lighter consistency, more like #18 of your other drawing.