ezayak ? inshalah kolo bekheer, ana men masr, enta meneen ? yesharafni eno akon fe mosab2etak.
My concept for consideration :
#14 , i created a shape from the english letters initial " LA " to form the left part of the human body abstract and the arabic letters initial corresponding " تا " to form the other right half of human body abstract as you see it. and i added the smiling head, looking upwards to give a positive feeling with a torch / flame like coming from the head itself.
On here #18 and #19 + #20 and #21 i showed you how it can work with the whole name and its .com and on its own and how that can be branded in both arabic / english to look pro and related ofcourse.
Let me know your feedback, we inshalah tekon 3agabetak.
lastu 'arabiyyan, wa lakinni uHibbuhum.. ana min al-hind aslan. faqat darasnaa al-uloom al-islaaamiyya fil-madaarisi al-islaamiyya, wa min jumlatihaa al-sarf wan-nahw.na'lamu al-qawaa'id wa nudarrisuhaa lighayr an-naatiqeen 'ala al-manhaj alladhi taraahu.
Regarding the submissions:
I've removed those that were totally based on Arabic renderings of the domain name, as the target audience would be people not native speakers.
In the earlier comment I meant a slight reference in the logo would be nice to see. In light of that, I kept the earlier two. So along these lines, if more can be produced, that would be appreciated.
Regarding the face and the human figure, it is something we'd prefer avoiding, again based on the target audience who are generally more conservative based on juristic inclinations.
Interested in seeing more. jazakAllah khairan for the effort.
Mashallah your arabic is really good for a none arab, but we are brothers at the end el hamdolelah wel hind sha3b gameel we tayeb.
My two new concepts based on your feedback above are as follows :
#23 this is an open book with a hint of a bird like shape as well, to deliver the message of you teaching arabic to anyone and flying that knowledge to them and spreading it.
#26 is a very smart one, my personal favorite, here i used the letter " ع " for " عربية " since this is what you mainly teach others, and who would later on, once they learn arabic, would see it very obvious like you and i do see it now, and will leave a pleasant feeling on them, agree ? So i made that letter shape look like a flying bird as well, spreading arabic knowledge to those all over or from anywhere.
Let me know what you think and i will refine based from there.
Here's what my tutotrial author said about the bird/ain one:
this looks nice I like how it doesn't spill on to three lines really nice but I'm still attracted to the clever way of writing "Arabic" from the other design.
The earlier submission is still a candidate, mainly because of the bird/ain combo which I like.. we're looking for the "Arabic touch" to be incorporated within the actual English words using some impressive method. Having the Arabic word sit under the site name doesn't satisfy this. jzk khairan for the repeated revisions.
#58 , #59, #60 and #61 this is as close to perfect and balanced i could get now. You can have it in different forms as i am showing, both mark with word logo, or word logo alone, or mark alone, which gives you a lot of flexibility and different ways of using it and applying it in anyway your branding yourself.
Hope you like this better and detail to attention i put into it.
The attempt to add Arabic to it in our opinion isn't working. I think some entire new element needs to be introduced. Otherwise, the original is better. This is what we're feeling about it.
Darken and sharpen up the original #26 and I think it's the best. The curve line under the bird is better..so basically, remove the word "arabi" from the latest submission.
We still have a few days left with this in case you come up with some new element. I can say this original is definitely very much a candidate as the others my team have been liking. So, it's far from decided at this point.
Thanks once again for the detail to attention. Much appreciated.
I appreciate you and your team kind words about liking my work and concepts / style am presenting.
Here are two different options to consider with different ideas
#90 light bulb with the letter ain which is the core of what your teaching, arabic in it, referring to lighting and broaden their existing knowledge by learning this great language.
#92 this is a two growing leaf abstract, with larger leaf having the letter ain embeded in it and shaded two different colors to relate with the dark grey " arabic " word in name under it. also you can see lower part of big leaf as an abstract of hands holding it up.
I ran these recent submissions by my tutorial author, and we both think the bird/'ain image is best. the newer ones are a tad bit too complicated.
Personally I am undecided at this point.. the bird/'ain one has an equal chance of being selected as the "final" winner, just to let you know. I really like it.
I personally agree, i find the ain/bird icon very strong, balanced and brandable and i think it will work best to describe what you do and your message in a positive / appealing / welcoming and friendly way.
Thanks for the head ups though, all the best in chosing the best logo for your business inshalah.
we would like to change the direction of the .com on the side to bottom-up instead of top-down... have the .com read so you have to tilt your head left, not right.