La boutique du jetableLogo Design Contest

Hello,

Many thanks for your entries.Here is the client feedback.

#90 : the red text is hard to read. The pictorial idea is intesrting, but maybe try different shapes / objects (other than just foirk and kife)

#89 : no. Teh name is much too small.

On my own account, I would add that the font is not modern enough and has somewhat of a "Broadway diner place" feel. Pleas experiment with different fonts.

Thank you !

#103 is revision of #90

Hello,

Thank you for your new submission.

The client feels that the addition of red did not work in the way it was done. I think that the base in #90 was nice and here are my own suggestions:

1) Use #90 but make the pictorial smaller and the text bigger.
2) Use a more modern, but not too fancy font.
3) The baseline "La vaisselle jetable pour tous" needs to be readable

Thank you and have a nice Sunday !

#'s 104, 105 & 106 - Variations of # 90 as per your request....Thank you, Sandi Lee

Hi Sandi,

Many thanks for these new entries. The client is still not quite convinced unfortunately.

Let's work from #106 and

1) try to put the fork and knife back in white
2) Experiment with a couple more - simple - fonts

Thank you !

#'s 129 - 131 More revisions...Thanks, Sandi

Hi Sandi,

Thanks very much. #130 looks good.