L'Abri CoffeehouseLogo Design Contest

Hey Verona,

Thanks for the design. I like it a lot. Though I wonder if you can play with the font. It's really nice but I'm afraid it won't look clear enough on the sign or on prints.

some tinkering with the steam and line (put it underneath the name maybe?) would be nice. any other variations would be appreciated as well.

thanks! :)

my sister just told me the steam looks like an S :)

please feel free to comment my work

yeah the steam in #47/#48 is definitely better. The fonts you are using are really cool, but I still think they are difficult to read, especially from a distance. Could you try using non-cursive fonts? perhaps something modern or classic?

thanks

I prefer modern over classic though

Of course! When talking about classic font, I think for Trajan Pro, Felix Titling, and Perpetua Titling MT

right. yeah, don't want classic fonts. modern ones are much nicer, especially for this kinda logo

Verona,

The font in #74 is not exactly what I meant by modern font. Could you play with some other fonts, especially some "cooler" ones. Not cursive, but not sans serif. I hope that makes sense. Thanks a lot!

What do you think of them?

really good. thanks

Verona,

I talked with friends and family, and they prefer your logo. The design of the mug represents the coffeehouse well: mug (coffee), rectangles (books, conversation), and handle (circle, community).

Can make some final touches on your design? A bigger mug would be nice. Also, the font is still too thin, and thus difficult to read. (I hate to do this, but a font similar to the one used in #165 would work nicely). Also, can you have the tagline as long the name?

Hopefully I will hear from you really soon.

Thanks a lot!

Daniel

I forgot to mention,right now we are looking to use the logo in 2 ways: a square design for the coffeeshop page, and to be put on a 110cm x 75cm sign.

Can you please make the designs as to fit these dimensions?

Thanks

of course

if I use the same font ( # 165), the books will be something different, not a books.
I used size 110cm x 75cm and everything is fine.
I think the slogan is very well

Verona,

I met with the staff yesterday and we settled on #178. It's exciting!

Can you just make a small edit? Please have the tagline in a different font than the title? Preferably something like your #140. Either bold or normal, not sure which one looks better.

Also make the same changes to #183 (though the letters of "L'Abri" are too spaced out. Could you perhaps use a bigger/different font? Also I think it's ok if "L'Abri" is shorter than "Coffeehouse").

Please also make the edits for the #176 format.

Thanks a lot!

p.s. I'm probably going to select you tonight (if you send the revisions today). Would I just get one file, of the one ranked first, or get a few variations?)

We can continue working out even if the contest is over. I'll make all the adjustments you meed.

Dear Verona,

I just selected you as the winner. Congratulations! :) Myself and friends working on the coffeehouse are very excited about your design.

Please send us the files whenever possible. We are also interested in getting a few variations of the winning design, like:
1. A modified #183.
2. black logo and text on white backgound, and vice versa. also brown over white.
3. different background colors.
4. color variations of the logo.

thanks a lot Verona. Hope t hear from you soon.

Daniel

p.s. here's the coffeeshop's facebook page (with a generic logi). I hope you "like" it :): https://www.facebook.com/LAbriCoffeehouse

of course. I start to work

You must accept the file. I will send the changes to your personal email

please give me your email address

Perfect! I just approved.

here's my email: dani31b@gmail.com

check out the facebook page. Please keep in mind that the logo needs to fit the page. thanks!
https://www.facebook.com/LAbriCoffeehouse?ref=hl