these are really well done, clever designs. I will admit we have a bit of a split opinion in our partnership over these designs. I really like them myself but at least one of my partners thinks they are too much about the "juice" concept. I really like the layout and love the graphic quality of the juicebox itself. #15 is interesting because the text can be used stand alone if needed and it doesn't look like it's missing anything. Perhaps there is a way to take #15 and bump up the game or tech angle and reduce the fruit or juice aspect to see fi we can strike a balance.
sorry - I forgot to give you feedback yesterday. We actually prefer your other juicebox (15) and we really like the wordmark aspect of your design as well. The gameboy juicebox looked too much like a stereo "boombox" redio to one of my partners. We really like 15 but feel it is more for a company that actually sells juice or fruit or something along those lines. I keep trying to think of ways to make it more about our business but I haven't really come up with anything very helpful. Really like the wordmark - really like the shape and simplicity of the box - just a bit too "juicy." Sorry I couldn't come up with any better guidance than that.