Intown Dental CenterLogo Design Contest

Hi Mr Henry

Im sorry fro the delay.. i took time to study the concepts and all info that you have provided,
Also I usually start joining a contest when its 2 or 3 days old since this is an open contest and chances are other designers can see your designs and copy the concept .. Although it is protected by the rules and policies here in LT but chances of similar ideas with mine will lessen my chances of taking the top spot as there are a lot of great designers here. Probably its just I just "revived" my account and havent been active until 2 weeks ago although i joined way back.
Anyway I have here several variations of the concept I thoought would be ideal for your business:
Swan, family, love and care, yin yang, korean symbol, asian symboi, bold presentation ideal for signage, easy to produce for web and print, "Intown" smaller than "dental center" to emphasize the latter and of course dental.
Let me know your thoughts and if you want to see some more tweaks or color scheme variations.
Hope you will like these and merit of course winning your contest,
Speak soon
Air

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I have 10 variations so far..

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more coming..

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Thanks Air for joining and for your explanation.

I like the cleanliness of #101 and the boldness of #98.

I have two key pieces of feedback though:

1. I think my wife (the dentist) is going to say the logo is "too busy" when she gets to look at it. So, see can you look at that, and
2. I like the style of the logo but am struggling to see what the logo represents.

Thanks - looking forward to more versions.

ok thanks for your comments.. the concept actually of my previous entries shows family of swans on top and people at the bottom.

But how about this one?

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Okay - I see where you are going with it now. It's certainly cleaner - and is going in the right direction.

#113 kinda looks like the Loch Ness Monster thought doesn't it?!? :) Maybe it's just me?

Will you try it in dark blue/navy?

Thanks!

ok I jsts read your message and did some modification.. how about this one?

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and this is in dark blue as requested

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#126 yes that's better. Let's hold off on this version until my wife reviews later tonight. Thanks.

the family icons e.g. #122 are interesting. We will think more.

this is black background to show you how it stands out

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Ok Sir Henry

I will just be posted.
kindly extend my regards to your wife. Im a Filipino so I so interested in Asian inspired elements in logo as well. I appreciate what dentist are doing.. We are in Austin and we have close relationship with our family dentist here

thanks
Air

Salamat!

these are other variations

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#154 nice addition!

Like #152 the best of yours right now. Thanks all the versions.

Hi

I know that Im not anymore on the top spot.. but its ok I have made some changes and variations on my designs.. I really hope you can give time to review my designs especially my latest submissions starting with this one.
thanks!
Im still hopeful for this contest :)

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Pls note that the previous designs were in reverse colors.. now starting from this entry and onwards will be the regular presentation.. I think you need swan that involves the entire family than just 1 swan :)

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Pls note that the previous designs were in reverse colors.. now starting from this entry and onwards will be the regular presentation.. I think you need swan that involves the entire family than just 1 swan :)

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Pls note that the previous designs were in reverse colors.. now starting from this entry and onwards will be the regular presentation.. I think you need swan that involves the entire family than just 1 swan :)

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But I understand yours is the decision but I really appreciate if you can review my entries very well despite all the other entries by other designers. thanks!

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Also I hope you and your wife will also be interested with this concept
Let me know if you like to see other color schemes.
thanks

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I think #217 is really sophisticated and beautiful. However, it sort of reminds me of a pretzel shape when I look at it from far back. Can we try making one of the swans neck a little higher but still graceful. Also we want to emphasize the word "family" in the tag line. Let's try a version where we color the word "Family" in blue and another version where it is underlined.

Hi

Ok thanks for your feedback.. here are the 2 variations.

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Hi

Here's another variation with city skyline on the swan's body.

Hope you like this too.
thanks
Air

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Hi Air - we like both thanks. It's a tough choice between the top 3 or 4 choices. We still have not decided.

If you have any more variations you want to submit we would love to see them.

Your work is excellent.

don't like change made to #230 - still prefer #217.

Can you try different colors and find a way to have it stand off the page more - i.e. a stronger 3D effect?

ok sir will do it after church today.. thanks!

Thanks.

hi

Just want to confirm that your final color scheme is gold and dark blue?

im reworking on the logo to suit your needs like stronger 3d look.. pls let me know

thanks
Air

Hi

I made this version more 3d looking and the gray part darker.

I still have other variations of this coming in a few minutes

thanks
Air

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here's a gold and dark blue combination.

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Pls use this for the gold version as i missed changing the part of the tail to gold in last submission.. thanks

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this is the city skyline version.

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This is a reverse gold effect..

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last but not least the dark blue version.. hope you will choose one of my designs.. thanks

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Hi

I really wish that you would choose any of my designs especially within the latest submissions.

If you like me to make some changes still please feel free to ask.
I appreciate your comments.

Thanks
Air

Hi

If you like me to try with other fonts that are bolder just let me know I can do all the changes you need.

thanks
Ariel

Yes thanks Ariel. Will you try some bolder fonts. Thanks.

just on #269

Hi

Ok thanks! But I couldnt upload the new file since this is already judging time.

thanks again
Air

Hi

im sending here 3 choices.. let me know if you need further tweaks

thanks
Air

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Hi

I made this version with the word "family" in horizontal orientation just incase this is what you are envisioning.

let me know if you still need further changes
thanks
Air

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Hi

I understand that you still need more time..

Im posting here another variation on the tagline.
let me know if you need further changes
thanks
Air

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Hi
Just to let you know that I will provide all the other formats that you requested such as B/W , with and without slogan etc.. We can do this through email as LT just allows upload of 1 EPS and 1 JPG file

Just let me know
thanks
Air

can we see 297 in black and white without the gradation - and also reverse white on black.

Also can we see it with just the logo.

Lastly can we see it withoug the tagline but with www.intowndentist.com

Thanks.

Also can we see different shades of blue/navy thanks.

Sean

This is base on #229 with texts of the one rank as 2nd..
Pls confirm if this is the one you are looking for so I can prepare the rest of the proofs

thanks
Air

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oops this is with the TM symbol.

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