Hi Thanks for your design. I like the style. The drawing is very elegant but the fort is too square it gives me a sense of industrial more than handmade. Try making the font more organic, more flowing with the image. Also, the hole with the strings should be more to the right. You could make the hole coincide with the first "o" in Iacopo. Thank you, IN.
Thank You very much for your comment and interesting to my design (#68). As like as You requested, I have tried to make again, changing (#68) with (#81). I have tried to make the font more organic, but still looks a little flowing with the image. I have also made the hole with the strings more to the right and the hole coincide with the first letter "O" in Iacopo.
I always wait for Your next comments, and hopefully You will be interested to my design.
Hi, thanks for new entries. As I said in a previous post. I am looking for a concept with a stand alone mark that defines the logo. I like your ideas, but they lack the punch that #98 has. In #81 the hole has to move more to the right. You can move my name as is to the right so that the first "O" of my name is under the middle of the guitar profile, by "middle" I mean the central curve of the body. Thank you, IN.
Thank you #114 is your best design. Unless, you want to refine it more with different colors and fonts. I will let the contest decide at the end. Thank you, IN.
Hi, #114 is still your best. the only way to make it work better is to take a new direction: make my name and the logo 2 separable elements like #98, see what comes out. Thanks, IN.
Hi, #119 is not legible, the color fight instead of working together. #120 is not as well proportioned as #114. Also, please keep in mind that I would like to see my name and the logo as 2 separable elements. See what you can do. Many thanks, IN.