Thanks for your new entry. It lacks the presence and individuality of designs like #98. There is very little you can do to improve this design, take a whole new direction with a standalone mark if you would like to compete. Thank you, IN.
Hi, not bad for a change of direction. The font could be more organic to help with the overall feel of the logo/message, also you could try the colors in reverse, I mean cream on a black background. I appreciate your swift response, thank you, IN.