re: entry #6, Interesting play on the Lone Star concept. We realize this is a 3D graphic, but it somehow still looks very flat - shadow sticks out more than the shape. maybe soemthing a bit more abstract. Type font Heart of Texas is too generic, looking for something with more strength. Some experimenting with color variations with graphics and text would be appreciated. Keep posting Kus Creative!
tks for re-posting. As you can see, things are moving along quickly with outr contest. Here is some feedback for you - you also happen to be the first to use the state as the basis for your design - interesting. As you may be aware. I hold all submittals below rank#40 prior to reviewing them. then I will move them accordingly. Here is some feedback for you.
re: #286 - like the concept, but a bit too busy visually for our needs.
re: #288 - like this submission the best of all. would like to see the co. name a bit smaller, but still positionally justified on the bottom of "Heart". The heart graphic could also be sized appropriately. The "of" could be adjusted just a little bit up to fit better into the heart shape.paw prints are fine. The purpose for scaling the co. name text is so that the 2nd line of txt can be Raised and spread out to cover a larger portion of the width of the state. text can TheN be bigger and spaced appropriately to read more clearly. still would like to try some other color alternatives Hat have not been used.
re: #289 - nice layout, but hard to read the 2nd line of text. colors could be owrked a bit more. like the use of the paw inside the heart. tks again for your contribution.
I have submitted new entries based upon your comments and also created a couple of different entries. I hope these work for you! Thanks for all the feedback!
re: #522 - like this concept the best of all your offerings. Colors - not so much. They seema bit on the subdued side. Need some with more pop. Charcoal and lime green ? and anythign else you can come up with. 3-5 really cool color choices would be good.