Hi Rutcie,
Thank you for your excellent contributions so far. I think you have great stuff.
To be honest, your entry
#1 is my favorite because I think it has the most potential to be refined into the winning design. It has great contrast and captures a lot of what our community is about.
I'd like you to make some changes to design
#1 for your next version. The outer ring of waves makes the design look a little bit like a saw blade so I'd like to simply remove it. I'd like you to work with the two remaining 'arcs' or moon shapes. Please make the orange/yellow crescent a bit more moon-like, perhaps less of a crescent. Please explore how to make the inner crescent into a cresting ocean wave. I think the wave cresting within a moon would be a cool concept. Lastly, I need you to look at the center core of the design because we really are not a community with big buildings as you've pictured. I'm not sure what should go there, but I know it's not buildings. Please follow the links in the brief for video and photos from Half Moon Bay. I think you'll get a lot of great ideas there.
Thank you again. Please let me know if you have any questions.
Best,
Rick