Grace Bible Church HonoluluLogo Design Contest

Appreciate your ideas so far.

Maybe try #53 with a slightly thicker brush stroke.

Thanks.

Met with our staff today. Your #53 design received good feedback, but we have a few requests.

Our model design is still www.kaleohouston.com. With that in mind ...

1. please change "Grace" font to thicker brush stroke
2. use a similar line to "kaleo" where line moves slightly upwards with a period/dot at end.
3. place line under "Grace" rather than under "Bible Church"
4. stylize the "Grace" font to look more unique. we like your "Hancock" which has a lot of style and doesn't look like a generic font.
5. perhaps all lower case "g"?
6. change "Bible Church" to same font as "Honolulu" font
7. use midnight blue rather than black color for "Grace"
8. change "Bible Church Honolulu" to dark grey color
9. do not include "passion for God, compassion for people"

I know it's a lot to ask, but your desing is very close if you can include these suggestions.

Thanks!

thanks for your feedback, i really appreciated your comment with some requests,

you can check my other entries #93, #94 with capital G and midnight blue color.

as your requested #97, # 98 with lower case G, if there's anything else, feel free to give more feedback

Thanks for working with us and receiving feedback. We appreciate you recognizing our suggestions so quickly. Here are a few more if you don't mind giving them a try:

1. All caps version of #93 with the right leg of the "A" interesecting the underline and a disconnected "E" (similar to Kaleo).
2. Alternate letter sizes very slightly.
3. Increase thickness of underline to match brush size of "GRACE"

thanks,
as your requested #122

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Nice adjustments in #122.

Maybe try not to curve/bend the "R" and "A" so much. Give it a stronger look?

The "G" has a thicker brushstroke than the "RACE" and the "underline". Please increase to match the "G". Thicker is better.

Also try to increase the font size of "Bible Church Honolulu" and extend past the "period". See #110.

Appreciate your working with us, Hestia.

thank once again for your feedback,

as requested #148, #149

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#148 looks good.

Please try to cut away/separate the horizontal line in the "G" in a similar way to the "E".

Maybe try something similar with the "A"?

Thanks for working with us.

Hestia,

The designs have been getting better and better.

We decided not to rush a decision but to let the ideas be refined further over 5 more days of competion.

Your hard work and time is so appreciated.

thanks,

as your requested #166( with cut line in the G ), #167 ( no line in the G ) , #168 ( similar with the A )

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Please give #166 another try with the detached line on the "G". Looks a bit messy.

Also prefer the "R" with a shorter tail on the top left corner.

Thanks, Hestia. Final day of the competition so please submit any other ideas you may have.

Please also place your top ranked designs on a blue background like the "kaleo" logo.

Some of the other designs in the competition did the background well.

We like #148 font with the "Bible Church Honolulu" layout of #94.

The "G" of #148 doesn't look finished. Looks like there are some extra lines and overlaps that aren't supposed to be there.

thanks once again for your feedback
as your requested.
please check #207, #208

Thanks for the adjustments.

Please try #207 with the underline style of #94.

I think we're getting close ...

#208 is my fav

thank you
new revision #285, #287

by the way , thank you eastcoast :)

as your requested #288, #289, #290

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