Don't overdo the clouds. The clouds were just an idea that was effective with binoculars for the idea of looking for something and discovering it. Your
#4 is the best in this.
Don't combine the m and the p.
I didn't love the faces like I was hoping to in
#20. The people still aren't really interacting, they're kind of awkwardly staring at each other. Might caption bubbles help? In
#21, they're happy and friends, which is good, but it doesn't show to me what glimpse is.