#20 thanks a great surprise ! The words gamification and SPICE are the two key words, the font and styling should be different - which you have done . I would like NOT to mix the colours of the letters within the keywords themselves although the keywords themselves can be different colors and that is welcome. The logo element however can be as colorful as needed. You have successfully included color fun and controversy is also welcome. I let you come back with a revised design before making other comments.
Thanks for the feedback! my new tweaked design I have changed to your specifications and feel it’s a great improvement and hope you think so to, I have slightly changed the logo icon to give it more of a 3D effect and 'cool gaming look' I have made gamification and spice dominant with different typefaces and colour. Hoping for more feed back soon and good luck finding your logo
#28 thanks for well thought out revision - certainly a great design and it feels a lot more quality than #20. I think the change to a single color for SPICE has helped greatly together with reduced size of logo. The 3D effect you have created is also good.
Some comments now: I dont mind if THE and OF have the same color or different colors, they could even have the same color as 'gamification' I dont mind also if THE and OF are capitals or lower case, whichever seems best from a design point of view. On my screen the bottom part of the blue in SPICE fades quickly into the black. I dont know if that is a design feature but thought i would mention it. Lastly, on the net 'gamification' is often shown in lowercase (but not always) so I would like if you could do one more take with gamification in lower case just for comparison purposes.
thanks for the effort - much appreciated.
By the way I am from the UK but living in Sweden !
The brightening of SPICE I feel is now TOO bright! It has lost the cinema trailer film feel of #28
We just need a little brightening of the color in #28 if possible, like the centre sphere.
and lets go back to the CAPITAL letters for GAMIFICATION
SO a) back to #28 b) switch the colors on The and of c) If possible SLIGHTLY nly brighen the clue text SPICE; like I put the light from a small lamp onto the logo - dont know how to explain too well but i am sure that you can understand
Great feed back! it’s refreshing from the usual clients on LT. really pleased you like the design. From your feedback I have changed the typography accordingly : I have changed the 'gamification' to lower case and also changed the font considering the overall design. If you would like to see this in different I’m happy to do so. I have out lined the 'spice' in white for a more attention seeking look with a small flair on the 'C' to give a clean sharp feel to the design. I feel 'the' and 'of' in capitals works well in a modern sense but as I said before just say and I’ll show you different concepts. The best way to get your ideal design is through feedback and you seem to be doing a good job of it. Keep up the good feedback.