Thanks for giving us a few options. Can you please try a smaller van, with more of an Australian feel and a different face - I think the bumber might look like a mostache, but its not really the feel we are looking for. Ok with a background, but no birds. The Australian outback is red and brown with maybe some yellow, so prbably more in those tones. The writing in #7 is ok, but still not what we are looking for. We look forward to some more entries from you.
Hello. We like #8 more than the other designs you have submitted, but is still not what we are after. I've put some links on the contest discussion to assist - we like the brighter orange used on your other designs. Is there some font that is a little more 'fun' that could be used, as we are all about the adventure, even though catering to 45 - 65 year olds. Like the writing style on design #1, however needs to be bigger for the slogan. Like the hands also on #1 which gives more personality. Like the eyebrows on #8. Really interested to see what else you can put up for us.
Hi again - have just spoken with the team regarding your design, and we like where you are going with #8, however hoping you can make a few changes for us to look at. Could the mouth be a little more 'happy/smiling' (we like the eyes and tongue), and change the colours to brighter orange in terms of the writing, and a different colour for the road. If the van could be a little more 'cartoon like'. We are very keen for arm/hand waving - just one. Either keep the van pointing the same direction, or more straight on, depending where you go with the drawing. Is it possible to then have it with a hat, and also without, as we are divided on whether we like the hat in the logo. Thanks again for this design.
Some of us are also liking your other series - in particular #4 and #7 - in particular the hat. Could we try a more straight edged van, give it a waving hand, tweak the mouth so the 'face' is more part of the van, and also enlarge the windows as the campers here have big windows. One with hat, and one without. We are also divided over the background, so perhaps a tweak to that also. Thanks again for your designs.
Hello, Liking the changes you have made so far with #19 - the road is much better and like the colour more than the red. Is it possible to brighten up the writing to a bright orange, rather than red orange? We'd like if possible for you to put in a couple of different colour options - not necessarily in orange, but until we see it, not sure on the colour of the van - perhaps there is a better colour? Perhaps you could make a few changes and gives us more options with this one? Finally if we could make the face more smiling or a cheeky smile - talking mouth we would be happier. We all like where this one is heading... Thanks!
Fair enough about the hands. Probably prefer the colour road and style of #19, but something about #20 we like more. Still not there with the writing font or colour - but we like the bright orange of your #7. Looking for comical writing style. Would like to see you go further with the hat concept you had from #7 - just a bit bigger and in Australia you have corks dangling off the hat - is that an option?
Liking #36, but still not quite there. We're trying to work out what it is - we do like how #19 is kind of curved up on the road, rather than flying around the corner on two wheels. Still use the campervan style in #36. Loving the hands. Still thinking about the font - like that style the most out of your series though. Maybe it could be straightened, but not sure if that is it either - can you have a bit more of a play with it and see what you can come up with. Just remember we like bright but has to be easy for 45 - 65 year olds to read. Thanks again for your designs.
We don't mind #44 but can you use the same orange as #36, and probably need to tweak the eyes a bit for us - love the hat. We still like the style camper of #36 more (in particular the face), but like the orange you have in #36 - can you try and put the two together and dazzle us? Think prefer no sun as well.
Getting good, but still a few changes if thats ok. Can you keep the font style of #45, but make it darker/brighter like the colour of #36? Could you also try the road bright orange (same colour as font) or something like that? Could you please submit that, and then also another one the same, but with the mouth of both #44 and #19. We're not sure what it is, but its just not moving into first place as is, so this might help it work better for us. Really like where this one is going, especially the hat. Nice work.
#59 I put an orange road and changed mouth a little. Also, for #45 and #36 the font colors are the same so I adjusted the orange a little bit, hope it's a little closer.
Hey Bluberri - maybe that's why you are the designer - not sure that orange works #59? BUT it does look ok on our website - maybe can we tweak it somehow? Maybe no shadow of the hat corks (dots) but keep the shadow of the van. I'm liking the mouth, but still prefer the font style of #45. Although some of us like the wavy style of #29. Can you do something with that?? We also need to make sure we can still read the slogan when reduced to fit on business cards. The shade of orange you are using is working well. Looking good, but 'as is' like #45 more than #59. Could you maybe try the new mouth on #45, and think about what we've said here and interpret it?? Thanks again for your efforts.
Hey Blueberri We're liking it a lot, but need some more changes. Like how you are really trying different ideas - although we will stick with black arms rather than white. Number #74 in terms of font and style of campervan is our favourite of your series now, but see how the road is shaded brown, can we try that in bright orange shaded - maybe to brown (or just in bright orange - like you see in some of the font writing from earlier entries). Like the bright orange of #59 as a base, and also the shadow of the van, but please no shadow for the corks on the hat. The dots detract for us. Thank you very much for all your efforts, really happy with your work.
Ok, we really are looking good now. we like the van most in #45 with the hands up though so they don't get lost (can wave or not wave) We also like how there is a gap between the writing and the road which #45 has. Can we keep the font and style/colour of the writing #77and #76 but still keep the gap between the road and words? Whatst he difference between #77 and #76? I am not sure by having the bigger writing if you can keep the gap, but we really like the bigger writing AND the gap :-) Can you do #45 with just the bigger writing and keep the road that colour, and show us, and also change the road to the same as #77/#76 and show us? Thanks!
I changed the road and arms, for #76 and #77 text is a little further down and van a little bit more off the ground. Do let me know if you want any more changes.
Excellent #81 is looking great - one tiny thing. With putting the arms up, one of the corks is under the arm. The corks are what makes yours look so great - do you think an extra cork on the hat - maybe on the right? Love the font, and love the van. I'll be needing to use this on business cards also - will it work as a smaller version? Thanks again for all the changes you've made so far.
#82 and #83 I moved the hat over just a little and also added an extra cork. The small text shouldn't a problem for business cards, text can get real small and stay readable when printed. If somehow the text doesn't feel right, you can even get the slogan printed bigger across the bottom or top of the card. With the final files the winning designer can send you a versions with and without the slogan, that way you have more flexibility in how it's printed.
Thanks for that Bluberri. #83 is our favourite - great to know we can have with and without the slogan, as we'll be needing it like that. Thank you for all the effort and changes you have made. Really happy with this, don't think we need anything further tweaked on this one. Excellent job.
Congratulations on your winning entry! When you send the file through, can you please ensure that you send just the camper, with the Gallivanting Oz/camper (without slogan) and also obviously complete. If you could also send us a mirror of the campervan (looking the other way) we would also be grateful (in 3 versions, just van; with just Gallivanting Oz/camper; and complete with slogan). Please let us know if this is not possible. I'm sure you'll hear from us again in the future.