Janisart, Loving your stuff. Can you take entry number 13 and place the writing on a white background. Can you then place it on a white background and rim the edge with a bronze color. In addition, can you please do the aforementioned two with a thicker letter (using the same font) with the thought being that if this were a sign on a huge facade that it wouldn't get lost because of the thinness.
In addition, will you take the above 4 as well as entry number 13 itself and tighten up the double "s" at the end so they don't look so disassociated from the letters FITNE.
Thanks.
In addition, if you look at entry number #11 which is not yours (and forget the letters), can you create a separate "wispy" logo that could sit to the left of the your words, much like the way that person created something above the words.
#23 Working on bolding the font for 'Freedom Fitness'. I wanted to try a graphic element using a cursive lowercase 'f' mirrored itself, it forms the abstract female shape. I'll continue to work on improving my design, thanks again for you feedback!
I'll continue to explore graphic elements to go with the typography. It would have to be significantly different than the graphic element in #11's design, it is that particular designer's own concept, so copying is a big no no.
I currently have you ranked number one and I love the lettering that you have done. The individual I have ranked as number two, I love the logo. I wrote to Ivan Fedorowich, of Logo Tournament and asked, "I want to select two winners because I want what two people had to offer." His comment back to me was, "if you need to arrance a split you can PM both designers and request their cooperation. Please have them email support that then intend to split the prize. The one who will get the gold will pay the other designer". That said, I would like your support in this. Whether you are agreeable or not, please let me know asap.
One other request before we finish this. Would it be possible to put a little more space between each of the letters of the words Freedom Fitness. They seem a little squished.