Try changing the font to something that is not so "computer" techy. Also can you throw the water from the lettering? Like a fountain throws water? Look at my website and watch a couple video's of some of our fountains. I admire your willingness to change!
It appears as if i have irritated you. If so, i am sorry. I like your work, but i had too many others pushing me away from it. they said there were too many frogs in logos already. I would welcome any other entry!