Hi. Nice ideas. I like the design of the 'o' in Point, but would like it in a different location. A few notes:
1. Please make all the letters in FocalPoint the same color and font. No check mark over the i.
2. I'd like to see the gold circle you made put inside a solid navy blue circle (maybe try a version with a black circle or with a dark gray circle) with a gold dot in the middle of the circles to match the color of your sliced gold circle.
3. keep the horizontal lines and insert the new circle in the middle of the lines.
4. spread out LEADERSHIP to be the length of the FOCALPOINT above.
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1. Please make all the letters in FocalPoint the same color and font. No check mark over the i.
2. I'd like to see the gold circle you made put inside a solid navy blue circle (maybe try a version with a black circle or with a dark gray circle) with a gold dot in the middle of the circles to match the color of your sliced gold circle.
3. keep the horizontal lines and insert the new circle in the middle of the lines.
4. spread out LEADERSHIP to be the length of the FOCALPOINT above.
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