We like the technical and artistic talent exhibited in this entry. We like #66 best of the two. We could totally see it on the corner of a game box and on other marketing materials.
We would really like to see this pig be more fun, playful, adventurous and aspirational. As he is right now, this pig looks a little confused or lost to us.
Your design is bright and colorful - two pluses headed in the right direction. We'd love to see you come back with this pig wearing a new expression - perhaps a little more excited and joyful, determined, passionate, approachable.