#32 is definitely moving in the right direction. Can you add some variations switching out the color of the fonts in Flour Bloom? Maybe gray & purple or Gray & pink. Also, can you the owl just a little smaller & shorten the wings.
#35 is moving on track! I'd like to see the following incorporated into this design:
LOVE the owl is #50 Perfect chef hat I don't like pink batter, please use purple. Change spoon to whisk Play with the batter on the whisk, make it drop to create a period at the end of "taking the sweet road." Can you do a variation with the font used in #31 I also really like the colors in #49
Thanks for the great feedback. It really helps when you let me know what you like and don't like and what you want to see differently. I have worked on some revisions for you based on the requested changes and the email... Please let me know if I missed anything. Thanks!
This is really tough! Great job! I really appreciate all the designs. There are so many great ideas, but here's what we've narrowed down for some final editing:
#68 keep everything as is, but remove the owl's feet.
#50 change the the pink to gray, switch out the spoon for a whisk, and move the slogan to the left just a bit so that the batter dot's the "i" in the word "taking".
I'm really loving #72, but I'm a little torn. Here are the keepers on what I love for #72: - Love the color of the owl, hat color, whisk & the droplet. - Font for bloom - Slogan
However, there are a few changes I'd like to see for #72: - Love the font for flour, but the from a distance the "F" & "L" appear so close together that the word looks more like "hour" vs "Flour" Can you change the spacing or make the F uppercase? - Please remove the legs/claws from the owl - Can you move the owl to the right just a bit. I feel it's too close to "flour"
I am so glad that you like them; I have made the requested revisions for you. Don't hesitate to ask if you need to see anything else. I want to give you the best design for you. Let me know what you think and I look forward to hearing from you.
D, love the new design and they eyelashes are adorable!
Can you create the following from #93 keep all fonts the same, but change the following colors: - pink to the purple like in #91 - purple owl to gray like in #91
Very close... #95 & #96 change the color around the eyes back to black and shorten the eyelashes just a bit Can you pull the "F" just a hair closer to the "L"
#101 another great one! The "f" is in perfect placement. The eyelashes look really nice. Flour Bloom colors and fonts are a great combination. Stick with these. In future submissions, please change "taking the sweet road" colors to black vs. purple.
Something I'm debating on is I'm not too sure of the gray owl. I like it, but think the colorful owls add some playfulness. Would you be willing to submit other color variations for #101? I like some of the purple colors you've used and like when you integrate all the colors into the owl. It seems to pull the font colors together.
Keep up the nice work! I really am loving all the elements you're bringing to the table.
Also, for #101, I think it might look good if you were to shorten the talons you previously used in #70 and place them directly on the "m". This will make it look like the owl is perched on top of the font. I just don't like the owl's talons showing if it's floating between the words.
I hate to ask, but my husband and I still keep going back and forth on colors and can't seem to agree. He'd like to see #116 with the word "flour" in black, "bloom" in the purple (ref: #100). Keep the lashes, but change the owls color to match the one in #85. #116 the talons look really good vs #115. When changing the color of the owl, can you make the talons black.
Some additional notes: I don't like the color of the owl in #114. I do like the larger sized owl. Spacing for the "f" & "l" is perfect on all of them. Keep them as is.
You are probably ready to ring our necks, so I appreciate your patience with all these changes. Thanks again for all the great designs! It's really tough to choose!
Don't worry about it. I have no problem making these changes for you guys. It is my job after all. :D I have made the changes for you on the owl and the feet; I wasn't sure if you wanted to put the beak back to the color in #85 or not so I am putting up both; also a couple of variations based on what both you and your husband like....maybe find a happy medium. Look forward to your thoughts once again.....
I love #119. I prefer to have the beak to match the color of bloom and I also like when the perimeter of the eyes are in black. So the #119 owl over all is really great. Nice work!
My husband would like to see #119 with the owl in a plum color :0). We've been trying to match the colors from the blog site (www.flourbloom.blogspot.com) and think we're getting pretty close. Thanks again for everything!!
I like what you did with the pupils in #129! It seems to brighten and liven up the owl. Can you do that for #119?
My husband really likes the plum color in #125. Are #124, #125, #129 the same shade of plum? I like it too, but would like to see a version with an owl that has the pupils like #129 in a shade that is in between the purples in #119 and #129.