Entry 11 & 12 are interesting. Could the design show the lines coming out of it transition into a road because we are talking about vehicles financing? Change the colors if you need to.
The contest is about to go to the TOP 5 with you leading. I really like your designs the best and want to tell you the alterations. I like ENTRY 13 the best even though I have ENTRY 14 as number 1. I like the swoop coming from lower on the circle. Here's what I'm going to ask as adjustments:
1. Move the FLEET LENDING SOLUTIONS closer to the design as in 14. 2. Make the SWOOP as thick coming out of the circle on 13 the same as 14. 3. The first E in FLEET needs to be separated from from the L. A font like #41's is my preference. 4. The blue part that extends outside circle at the very bottom, can you remove it? 5. Can you make the white line on the blue like you did above on the orange where the blue crosses itself? 6. Can you graduate the color from orange & blue, as it crosses the circle, to black, i.e. like a road?
I have one last thing for you to think about. I am NOT an orange fan yet. Are there any other color combinations you like?
Okay the improvements to the FONTS are great. The colors are great.
1. Can you look at #68 and swoop that comes through the design has a better gap is better and extends to the correct length and then match it? 2. On #13 you had a white line on where the orange cut across the design and it looked good but it's gone now. Can you put it back and then do it to the back below as well. 3. Finally, the part of the black that extends beneath the circle needs to disappear.
If you need me to draw it out I can. Thanks for your great effort.
What we love is the depth you added to the design in shading and color. It's striking and that's good. The only adjustments are to the words and wanting to confirm the color selection.
1. Can you place a very small space between FLEET LENDING? 2. Can you pull SOLUTIONS together a tiny bit? 3. Are there any other blues you can use? 4. What are YOUR color choices if this were your logo?
Thanks and great job. I'll hit the SELECT WINNER after these couple mods.
Yes 137 looks good. I am a huge red & black fan. The offset color for depth doesn't appear as well on that or am I just missing it on the upper blue part?
One radical color change JUST to the DESIGN. Leaving the WORDS alone can you do a gray/black scheme on the design with the WHITE in the swoop changing color to match the LENDING word below?
One radical color change JUST to the DESIGN. Leaving the WORDS alone can you do a gray/black scheme on the design with the WHITE in the swoop changing color to match the LENDING word below?
On the DESIGN where you have red & black or blue & black:
1. Can you go Gray & Black?
Where the design cuts back over the circle, (red, white & black or blue, white & black) make it gray, red & black or gray, blue & black matching the color of the word LENDING?
Also, the word FLEET in #139 has greater depth because of shading, please use for the above colored one. Finally, increase the gap very slightly between FLEET LENDING and very slightly squeeze SOLUTIONS.