FlatsClass TV Tee-ShirtLogo Design Contest

Thanks for the invite, and additional comments helped. But here is my first attempt, andy comments or concerns would be helpful. Thanks and good luck, Pat

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Pat -

Very cool start.

The "Fl" looks more like a "p". I know what it says, but somehow the "F" needs to stand out more.

What would you think of making the tarpon bigger? To the point where it's on top of the lettering some?

Background tribal art a bit too bold, maybe.

"Getchu Some of That!" seems a bit of an afterthought. What if it was on a curved path as well? Up or down.

Also, what would you do with a second color?

I wish I could see a bigger sample. So hard to judge the detail. These things will be printed as big as we can fit on a Tee.

Send me your e-mail and I will send you a larger JPG. If you would like when I get the 2nd round completed...

Just let me know.

Thanks,
Pat

Thanks alot for the additional comments, Think they really helped the design alot. But entering a B/W and my reco on a two color design. Also sending you e-mail. Thanks and anything else just let me know. Take care, Pat

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Is there a hidden meaning behind the exta "t" ?

Nice call View.

Pat, can you make the fish stand out better? Less distress on the fish? Whatever it takes to pop it off of the background better.

sure, ill take care of it. and shoot it over to ya...