A big "Flats Class" with the slogan across the upper back, then the red fish in the middle with a fishing rod around it. I hope this is close to what you want. Thank You.
Pretty cool David. I very much like the "retro" feel.
Loose the fishing rod in it's current state.
If you can expand the dark "wedge" background into a fuller shape, with an interesting design (splash, sunburst, light rays, water ripples) that might be cool as well. Maybe the redfish is splashing out of the shirt.
You did a great job on the redfish. Would it be to much work to character a snook and tarpon as well? Left, right and "behind" the red? Like a gang of angry fishes?
Good start. Expand. If you want to bring in some colors, please do. I'd love to see it.
Very nice. Love the red. I think the reversed fish are too dark. Maybe black strokes, fill with light gray?
If we choose the design, can you take the time to render the other fish as a snook and tarpon instead of cloned reds?
Can you expand the sunray background all the way around, like a sunburst? So, come down the 45 degree lines about 1/3 of the way, then go all the way around to the other side with long, pointed rays. Not a perfect circle. An additional layer between the last fish and the marquee. Just tell me if the idea sucks.
Yes I would, very much, take the time to properly illustrate both the tarpon and snook. I am actually working out the details in my sketches. Thank You.
PS. I will also make these change to see how they work, then post the results.
Here are the amendments. I hope they make the difference.
In actuality, the color red on my design is actually intended to be printed using a method called foiling, where the colors (red in this case), is given a metallic finish. This would greatly enable the Design to pop and would look REALLY cool. Here is an example of what I am talking about : http://ep.yimg.com/ca/I/yhst-93957457819680_2065_84874620
P.S. So the red in my design looks like that and your idea doesn't suck, as you can see in our design.