Thanks the revision is better as I don't need more things (the people in the first one) in the logo. It will just clutter it. The font is very dated looking, it needs to be modern and clean looking. Also is is very hard to read the ss in fitness
Thanks but the 3 revisions 17, 18 and 19 are all very similar and still have the same problem. Have a look at the Slim Scents contest, the fonts used there are the type of style I want. It is clean, modern, stylish and not cluttered.
Yes that's a little better, but still not what I'm after. Please incorporate the arrows into the logo and make it a more modern font, see my last post on the main comments page
Yes it looks a lot better thanks. But it still needs to be made more modern and stylish. It would be good if more than one arrow could be in it too in a more clever way.
Much better! This is far more stylish, I really like #63 (the arrows stand out better than #65). Can you please try a few different variations and fonts of this style. The line through the centre is overly good, so it's okay if you keep the line or get rid of it for other variations.
Yes I like a #82 better, being a bit stretched looks more modern, plus the colours are right. The top 3 or 4 ranked logo, including yours are all very good. However they all need a bit of work to go from good to amazing! Can you please try a few different fonts. I like the font #86 has used as it is very modern and softer than yours. Although I know that one may not work with the arrows. Another arrow somewhere could also be an option, either in the letters or as a backdrop? Thanks, looking good so far!
I like #110 as much as #82, however I still don't know if the font is quite right. Please also get rid of the line through the middle, although it looks good it makes it too hard to read. Stick to these colours too thanks rather than all red. Please also see my comment under main comments.
Thanks they look much better and are easier to read. They are very nice but still not quite my number one choice. I like the design so please just try different fonts, especially thinner ones. Thanks for all your hard work!