First and UnionLogo Design Contest

Hello Zie, thank you very much for your entries.

These are very interesting and it is possible that #299 could move to something. The "and" must flow as part fo the reading and the alignment of the tagline needs to be a little more cohesive.

I'm going to move them to not interested for clarity as we review, but #299 is different and intersting.

Thank you again.

Thanks for the quick feedback..
I'll revise as soon...

regards,

Thanks for the quick changes. The spacing on the left (First and Union) feels just right.

The spacing on the right (tagline) seems like it could perhaps take a bit more tweaking. I can't quite tell what it is aligned in relation to, the length of the bar maybe could use a review,too? Just kind of a fine tuning of the details and spacing so it holds together a bit more.

I like it, it feels "newspaperish" and kind of like a headline.

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detail tweaking...

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