First and UnionLogo Design Contest

feedback appreciated

(This comment references Entry #80)

another version
feedback still appreciated

(This comment references Entry #81)

Thank you for your entry.

As regards to #81 and #82

I think the approach is interesting, and there is some strength to the bold statement.

The icon makes me think a little bit of Enron http://lawyersusadcdicta.wordpress.com/2008/01/22/high-court-denies-enron-investors-petition/

Enron was an energy company and the icon, dropping into their name worked on those terms. For us, something that bold might be OK, but it should make one think of content, of writing, or organizing and structuring words and text.

I'm not sure how I'd feel about the text if the icon was different, but I've a hunch that the text would need to change to work better with a new icon.

I can see the U and a tad of the F in the icon, which is fun, but I think we want our icon to point toward content, rather than toward our company as a name.

Thank you again for your entry.

# 81 was moved to not interested to avoid too many concepts on the main page that have multiple versions at this point, once we pick a concept then I can bring back out the versions.

Thank you.

Hi,
thank you for your fast feedback

first, i never see enron logo, until you show me the link
second, i got your point and i'll submit another proposal soon

rgds,
ipanema

3rd proposal
first (number 1) -- as content
U -- as union
feedback appreciated

tx

(This comment references Entry #85)

Thank you again for the entry.

#85 icon is too close to our name.

If an icon is used, we want it to point to content concepts no our name or number as in first.

first and union

(This comment references Entry #168)

#168

Thank you again for your entry.

This is moving in the right direction. Needs more cohesiveness and simplicity I think. My feedback is not clear I know, the differences between logos are getting more subtle now. Please let the rankings serve as guide to feedback or please feel free to ask me questions.

Thank you.