RE: #21 - this has some character! try replacing the orange with a lava red color. (we are not sure if orange is the color of choice for this brand) RE: # 23 - there us potential there, change the fa_a to lava red and see what develops. the pods in the v may be a little hard to decipher though. RE: #24 - funky font! but kinda detergent product looking, don't you think?
Thank you for your latest submission. #51 is on the right track. We would like more depth in the font, maybe through the use of shadowing or black or green outline for the font instead of the current red one. We would like to move away from a realistic looking fava bean pod towards a more abstract representation of it. Alternatively, maybe we can depict a single fava bean (without the pod) at the end of the word where a period would go.