Falcon GraphicsLogo Design Contest

Hello,
Here's my first concept for your logo. Let me know if you'd like any changes. I'd be happy to oblige. Thanks!
Pam

(This comment references Entry #229)

#229 is an interesting design that looks quite well on our site. If we were to use it, we would like to see a few changes:

1) Pick a more interesting font
2) Make the slogan white
3) Raise the slogan a bit, so it's not so far from the company name.

However, we've decided that we need a graphic image that can be used separately of the company name, and your design makes the graphic image an integral part of the text, so they can't be used separately. Can you offer us alternatives?

Revised falcon

(This comment references Entry #271)

Hi,

Thanks for the feedback. Sorry I didn't see your comment until after I had already uploaded a variation of my first entry. So your requested changes aren't reflected in entry #271.

However, I'll gladly make the revisions you suggested and post new designs for your review.

Thanks!

Pam

Thanks, Pam. Looking forward to seeing what you've got. The contest ends in 22 hours, so, sooner is better than later!

Hi,

Thanks so much for the reminder. I am working on several options, and will post later this evening, or in the wee hours of the morning so you can review before the contest's final few hours.

Thanks for the interest in my design.

Pam

Hi,
Per your request, here is a new entry with changes to the font and the graphic. Let me know if there is anything to be adjusted on this, or the 4 entries to follow.
Thanks!
Pam

(This comment references Entry #353)