We really like the idea here, but we're not happy about the plane or the color scheme. We like the parachutes to be more visible because they are an important part of the message.
I like the plane in it as well, we just didn't like the plane you have used in Entry #1 and 17. Something more modern, maybe black and white or some grey color?
The parachutes look good bigger and the colors look good in #18, but I'd like to see it with a plane if possible?