Could you focus more on etiquette and less on moms? Also, the image of the bird feeding a baby and of the nursing mother are more about moms. Please see our site at etiquettemoms.com. We sell a lot of programs, including etiquette for children, teens and business people; live skills; communication skills. It is etiquette certifications for trainers, not etiquette classes for moms. Please keep submitting. Your work is beautiful!
The Entry #51 is a rough draft of a woman/mom who is proud of to be an “etiquette mom.’ If you like this concept, please let me know and I’ll continue.
Entry #62 is interesting. It relates to our being a training/certification company versus a playgroup of moms teaching etiquette which we are not. Could you provide some versions of this example putting the emphasis on etiquette not on the word moms. We are looking for a very streamlined, professional look that people will be proud to see on their course completion certificates. The colors should be more vibrant-not girly-rich purples and magenta, vermillion perhaps. The majority of our clients are powerful woman, however many men take our courses so we do not want to alienate the men. After completing our courses people open their own businesses and teach in colleges, high-schools, large companies etc. We really appreciate your submission!