Thanks so much for all your designs and patience. #58 is fresh and fun...so I'm holding to show team. That said, we are not looking to recreate the entire corporate logo, but rather create a fresh 'social brand' to celebrate our 40 years as an expert in skincare and beauty field with a new campaign dubbed "EG 40".
Typically, horizontal line formats are hard for me to work with -- they tend not translate in social media, though the 'read' nicely.
I've added some add'l info in general comments and updated brief, if you're so inclined to further review.