Re: #48 very interesting but a little too busy. Need to balance it out to see if the concept works or if it's too "kitchy."
Can you rework making "canterbury" shorter and fatter, closer to treatment you've done in eleven and font in entry #40? I need it to pop but to be crisp...perhaps balance the two words more equally so that treatment of the V and the E are more balanced, despite what i wrote this morning c:
FYI: talking to my client tomorrow: we'll narrow down the color choices re #32, #33, #39 and #40 and pare it down. to be reflected in rankings. Thanks for all of your work!
#49 and #50 Red needs to be brighter, as would love to see more of the tops of the E's tails a teeny bit. much better, but a 'tad' too modern. We have team meeting at 5pm EDT, if you can do beforehand that would be great.
Got feedback and unfortunately, he doesn't like it. "The XI seems totally misplaced, almost stuck in the middle of the words, obscuring them...." am going to move all of them down to bottom. I appreciate all of the work. Looks like we need to stay clean and bold.... Sorry.