Awesome application of the "eat" in a more literal approach to the features (the two sets of eye lashes work in that format as well). We are, however, leaning more toward the style of "eat" in the original design, but with improved letter shaping to better walk the line between letters and facial features (leaning more toward the look of letters than the look of facial features). The "a" or nose from the original design in particular was a challenge and something between what it was and what you did would be great. The "e" pupil could have been better in the original design, though we generally liked the shape of the letter. We were generally ok with the "t" in the "Logo Final Revised File".
Besides some clean up work on the original mouth (better matching the left tooth to the right), we like the original construct of "Wonky" (but w/o lines as you have it). We like to see the tongue and the "hinged mouth" as it is in the original design, kind of opening to say "ah" and eat some Wonky food! :-) The square mouth feels a bit like it is yelling to us.
With regard to color applications, the multi-color option was helpful to gauge which combos we like the most. Those combos are red-orange and red-yellow. We'd love to see red background with orange letters and vice versa. Same goes for red-yellow. The only other comment with regard to color is that we think a black interior of the mouth or something that sets it apart from what would otherwise be the lips around the mouth would be great. We suppose that teeth should generally be the lighter color (as you have it in the multi-color option) as well.
Great work again in responding to our comments. A few additional comments with regard to entry #6 that we would love to see:
Please make adjustments to... - arrange the letters of "eat" a bit more similar to that in the "logo primary" file, which makes the letters in "eat" a bit smaller, closer in together (laterally) and also a bit higher above the "Wonky".
- "offset" the pupil in the "e" to accommodate it being used for different color applications (i.e. we would like to be able to have the pupil be a different color from the rest of the "e".
- Make the shape at the beginning of the "a" at the top left more similar to that in the "logo primary" file. It's kind of squared off and fits better with the style of the other letters in "eat" and "Wonky".
- Use the mouth from the "logo primary" file, including the white space between the black lines to create the lips. The only real tweak to the "logo primary" file would be to smooth out that left tooth a bit at the edges.
The various color applications were very helpful to gauge how the logo might be applied. Let's focus on the black and white version with red tongue.
Again, thanks for the excellent feedback and direction.. Here are your requested revisions. If you need anything else; please don't hesitate to ask... Thanks, D
- Can you match the tongue to the one in the "logo primary" file? The one in that file has a bit more curvature on the right side and both the left and right sides curve down a bit more into the edge of the mouth.
- We think that a little more space between the "eat" and "Wonky" is going to work out best for us. Can you please move the entire "eat" up so that the bottom of the "a" rests at the level where the top of the current "a"s tail (on the bottom right of the "a") is located (as if you drew a line from the top of the current "a"s tail)?
Awesome work. With these revisions, I think we are all set!