Here is my entry. I was trying to make everything more condensed and well balanced. Also, made the thickness of everything more consistent. Hope you like it. Let me know what you think.
Hi Kappy. Thanks so much for the submission! Liking the edginess and creativity for sure. Also like the way the letters all relate to each other in the same style. Over the last few days, we've seen a few revisions to the original file from Schnick Studios that we really like, including the one that is ranked #1 that I think we are going to go with. Again, we appreciate the submission and look forward to seeing some more of your work should we need any other designs.
Thanks for the feedback. I will keep experimenting with the one i have, hopefully i could change your mind. But if you have really decided to go with the #1 design, should make a note so other designer won't spend the time to come up with new designs. Because i think a lot of people try to enter the last second.