I like #69 and how it looks like the "industries" part is riveted on to East Side. It just needs something to really make it pop and resonate....but I am not sure what.
I posted a comment about this on the main page. but just in case you did not see it, I will copy it here:
Hi All! Thank you all for the great designs. I talked to the partner on this and he thinks we are going too heavy on the industrial look. He would like it to look less factory and more small business type industry. Soften it a little. Could be retro/vintage but does not have to. Still wants the simplicity and the blue collar look, just not so "machine". I have updated the Pinterest page for ideas http://www.pinterest.com/sabinedukes/esi-graphics-inspirations/
I am going to go through the logos and make comments to this effect and see if there are ways to work with things you have already done. However, we are not abandoning the high ranked ones yet at this time either!