Denise Andrews PhotographyLogo Design Contest

Please let me know if any of these suit you!

(This comment references Entry #71)

I like the look of these! Can you play around a little with the text for #73? Also for #72 can you play around a bit with the circle size and placement? And maybe different color combinations also? I also do like #71 but I am not totally sure that's the look I am going for. Thanks!

Changes as requested! Please let me know if you'd like to see more. :)

(This comment references Entry #77)

Denise,
There are a few more than I'd usually submit, but I wanted to make sure that you have a chance to see what you might want.
Holli

Thanks for all of the options!

I like #80. Can you try a few different variations on the circles themselves?

I do like the cloud looking ones but for some reason the text feels like it is being squished in there, it looks a little disproportioned to me or something. Maybe its because the text is heavy looking and the rest of it is more delicate?

You're welcome!

With the circles on #80, are you thinking the larger circle of many, or the small circles themselves, or both to change?

I'll play around with the cloud one, I think maybe a different shape all together might be in order.

Played with circles and created a new cloud shape!

(This comment references Entry #85)

I like #86 but something about it is a little off still. Maybe different fonts?

Also I like #87 but the circles seem to be competing with the words because they are visually pretty heavy. What if the inner ring of (pink) circles was hollow (like in #86)?

Updated entries. I removed the inner ring of pink circles, which I think was the problem. Please let me know if you'd like those returned!

(This comment references Entry #94)

Two layers of circles, both hollow.

(This comment references Entry #98)

I like the fonts better in #94, but I like how the circles are fainter and closer and go all the way around the whole circle in #98 (but just the outer circle, not the inner one in 98). Also, for #94 I think the word "photography" gets a little lost, can it be just slightly stronger looking?

Also, I like #72 but what if instead of the concentric circles, they were sort of messier and less predictable? I am sort of picturing something not quite so pristine, more loose feeling.

I will have more revisions for you before the contest ends!

revised concepts

(This comment references Entry #141)

I like #143, but I think the colors got a bit pale. Can I see different colors on this? Also I prefer the font used for "Denise" on #141.

Brighter colors and the font you like—I'm happy to make more revisions!

(This comment references Entry #153)

I definitely think #153 looks better! Still it needs a little something, not sure what that is though.

A little less "perfect"

(This comment references Entry #166)

And taking it even further

(This comment references Entry #167)

Liking #167. Not sure what it is but still not quite right. Maybe too many of the floating circles? Maybe try a few different color combos?

I tried it in the blue/green that you've liked earlier—it's entered!

#175 is the blue/green

I'll try a couple more combos

#177, #178 and #179 for your consideration

I like the colrs in #177 but I like the composition of #178. The only thing about #178 is The small circles maybe need to be shuffled around a little, and more variation of the solid & hollow instead of just the 1 hollow small one.

Cooler colors, more variation in circles and their placement. I also spread the word "photography" across the bottom like in #177

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What if on #180 you leave the existing lines on the big circles that are already there, and maybe add a few that have a little more thickness to the actual line that creates the circle itself? Also can you try a few more color variations (new colors) on this one also? Thank you!

I also should have specified with my last comment on #180 that if the big circles need to move around a bit to make them look good, go ahead....

Same colors, but with weight variations on the lines

(This comment references Entry #181)

New color combo no. 1

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New color combo no. 2

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New color combo no. 3

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I apologize for withdrawing my previous three. They weren't quite right. I have them ready when you are!

Four new entries submitted. One has the same color combo but with different sized lines, three are separate color combination.

Love #190! I am going to sit on it and think about it for a bit. If you have any new submissions let me know and/or just upload them but I think I just need to sleep on it for now. Sometimes when I walk away and come back later something different strikes me.

I'm so glad! I do the same thing all the time. Let me know when you're ready!

Can you try #190 with the text bigger? And maybe bring the opacity down a bit on the circles? Also can you explore a few other new fonts? I know I said I was going to sleep on it but I can't get it out of my head. Lol.

I'd love to—I'll get you something new before noon PST tomorrow!

text larger, opacity lighter

(This comment references Entry #195)

text larger, opacity lighter, new typefaces

(This comment references Entry #196)

text larger, opacity lighter, new typefaces

(This comment references Entry #197)

Sorry it took me a while to get back to you. Yesterday sort of blew up in my face and I was slammed all day long. Ok. Here are my thoughts. #195 is starting to look a bit hectic to me. Maybe too busy. What if somehow we could combine the look of #195 & #177 to create more of a balanced composition and also a lighter feeling. I sort of like how the text is not necessarily bigger in height but in width compared to the circles in #177. Maybe you can play around with that? And somehow combine the variation of circle densities like in #195? And the text is still not striking me as "the one" yet. Is there something you can find that looks sort of like what is used in "Denise" for #177 but looks a little more handwritten? I have seen other fonts that looks sort of like pretty handwriting.

Two revisions—I can go even lighter in feel if you'd like with the circles, but I thought we'd start here.

(This comment references Entry #198)

Love that new font in #198 & #199 for "Denise." But now I feel like the font used in "andrews" is looking too heavy. Can you try a few others for that?

I think just 1 more change...

I really love #200, but I am just afraid the text doesn't stand out enough. Is there a way to make it more"bold" like in #177? But with the same fonts and everything that are in #200 already.

Everything a little bolder

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Only Andrews bolder

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I can go a little bolder on all #203 if you'd like. I wasn't quite sure that you were talking about all the text, so that's why there are two more. I'll check back in at least once more today!