Thanks for your great entries! On #59, can you bring in blue as a secondary color somewhere?
On #56, can we see is without the ring at the bottom and some blue added?
On #57, Can you shift the image to the right (as with #56) and rearrange the lettering without the horizontal lines? Also some blue - maybe in the center band. Also, I think we should drop the sun-like object at the top of the diamond. I really like this one as it makes me think of both children and adults reading together.
On #64 - I love the added figure but I think drop the book mark.
On #65, -I also like the added figure but I think either make it the same size as the other one or maybe superimpose/offset the smaller one in front of the larger one to convey the idea of a parent reading to a child.
Thanks so much for your efforts on this! Very exciting.
On #72, I'm afraid it is getting too busy. Let's try one larger figure representing an adult and one smaller representing a child and bring them together in the middle with the child slightly to the right of the adult and separated by a white outline.
Thanks - I like the changes on #83. Can you also try one with straight edges rather than the "deckle" effect or rough edges of the current version? I'd like to compare. Thanks again!