#1: Hey thanks for your submission!! Nice clean lines and we like the way you used the colours. The figure used seems to give us an endurance running feel, would prefer something a little more muscular (just not to the Mr Universe end of the scale!) to represent a bit more closely what we do. Also, not sure where we would then incorporate "South Melbourne" along with it (however, not so fussed on this part). We wouldn't want the font to be any more italicised then what has been used. Liking the type of orange you selected.