#38 - I like this. The tyopgraphy is excellent. Try it with the mark on the left. I tmigh tnot always work with it at top. Perhaps it's just the 'star' - it might get too confusing when it's scaled down. Or, some other shape that's evocative of thoughts coming out of the head.
Don't give up - this is a good approach, and I'd like to see the next step